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rather than post this in it's entirety here I bunged it on fictionpress (fanfiction for original fiction)
i found it the other day and thought you lot might be interested.
It is the second draft of Tobin and features the first appearance of Avili, Josian's not even in it yet, Kiran (the mad prince) is called Feryl and I don't think i'd introduced the seraphim.
nevertheless this is an unfinished draft, it ran afoul of bad timing, in that it was started and most of it done, in my third year at uni and i had other obligations like exams and essays and theses and fun things like that.
this was the first fiction i ever wrote that was killed by external forces.
nevertheless i thought you might like it.
if only for probably my favourite version of Tobin. and you know he owns me.
http://www.fictionpress.com/read.php?storyid=2253414
i found it the other day and thought you lot might be interested.
It is the second draft of Tobin and features the first appearance of Avili, Josian's not even in it yet, Kiran (the mad prince) is called Feryl and I don't think i'd introduced the seraphim.
nevertheless this is an unfinished draft, it ran afoul of bad timing, in that it was started and most of it done, in my third year at uni and i had other obligations like exams and essays and theses and fun things like that.
this was the first fiction i ever wrote that was killed by external forces.
nevertheless i thought you might like it.
if only for probably my favourite version of Tobin. and you know he owns me.
http://www.fictionpress.com/read.php?storyid=2253414